Speech Structure: Mastering the Introduction
Hello!As you know every speech consists of three parts which are introduction, body, and conclusion. The toughest part of a speech is the introduction. An introduction can "make or break" you as a speaker.
The inrtoduction may be of 4 types:
- Asking questions
- Making references
- Making a startling statement
- Giving a quotation
Task 1
The task is to watch the following public speech performances and identify the
technique(s) used in the introduction (attention-getter) in each
performance. Identify the thesis statement (write it down).
Evaluate the transition between the attention-getter and the
thesis statement on the scale from 0 (poor transition) to 3 (well-done
transition). 1.“How will we survive when the population hits 10 billion?” by Charles C. Mann at TED2018 https://www.ted.com/talks/charles_c_mann_how_will_we_survive_when_the_population_hits_10_billion
The speaker used the question as an attention getter. This thesis statement quite smoothly moves towards the thesis statement: Wizards and prophets working together have many paths to success in helping people to survive when the population hits 10 billion. I givee 3 points to smothyness to the introduction because the question is connected with the main topic.
2. “Still Standing” by Ramona J. Smith at the 2018 Toastmasters International World Champion of Public Speaking https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Tev43VNRIc
In the introduction the story is used. It smoothly leads to the thesis statement: Most often, our most challenging openent is ourselves. The transition between the attention-getter and the thesis statement is very good (3):she tells the story about a fight in the ring and then in the body she compares challenging situations with fighting.
3. “Every kid needs a champion” by Rita Pierson at TED Talks Education https://www.ted.com/talks/rita_pierson_every_kid_needs_a_champion/discussion?...en
The speaker used the personal story in the introduction. It smoothly moves(3) to the thesis statement: Children do not learn from people they do not like.
4. “How great leaders inspire action” by Simon Sinek at TEDxPuget Sound https://www.ted.com/talks/simon_sinek_how_great_leaders_inspire_action?referrer=playlist-the_most_popular_talks_of_all
The attention getter is the question. It smoothly leads to the thesis statement: The goal is to do business with people who believe what you believe. I give 3 points to the attention getter because the statement is connected to the main topic of the speech.
5. “Looks aren't everything. Believe me, I'm a model” by Cameron Russell at TEDxMidAtlantic https://www.ted.com/talks/cameron_russell_looks_aren_t_everything_believe_me_i_m_a_model?referrer=playlist-the_most_popular_talks_of_all&language=en
The speaker uses a personal story as an attention getter. It smoothly (3) moves to the thesis statement : Image is powerful, but also, image is superficial.
Hey! Thanks for your observations! I'm glad you enjoyed the speeches.
ОтветитьУдалитьHere are just a few corrections.
In speech 2 "Still Standing" by Ramona J. Smith the attention-getters are:
1. illustration (life as a boxing fight) or it’s also possible to define as telling a story
2. asking questions (Can think of the time what the life tried to knock you down?)
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In speech 5 "Looks aren't everything. Believe me, I'm a model", the attention-getters are
1. making a reference (I feel there is uncomfortable tension in the room right know because I shouldn’t have worn this dress)
2. making a startling statement, where the statement is an action, i.e. changing her outfit (which is the key component in her introduction)
3. asking a question (so why did I do that?)
I know these two are pretty hard. Anyway, we are learning and trying to take the best out of these activities and speeches ;)
I have understood my mistakes :) Thank you!
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